【英国留学】如何用3个小时写一篇大学essay | 论文干货
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| 0:00 | Against all advice, I did work full-time during my first three years of studying medicine at university. | 不顾一切的建议,我在大学念医的前三年,确实做了全职工作. |
| 0:05 | And although I'm not going to get into whether that was the best decision in the world in this video today, | 虽然我不打算 进入是否 这是世界上最好的决定 在今天的视频, |
| 0:11 | as you can imagine, it did mean that when it came to completing university projects, I didn't always have the luxury of time. | 你可以想象,它确实意味着 当它完成大学项目, 我并不总是有 奢侈的时间。 |
| 0:17 | So whether I liked it or not, I did have to come up with systems to do things fastly, efficiently, and without procrastinating. | 因此无论我是否喜欢,我确实必须想出一些系统来快速,高效地做事情,并且不要拖延. |
| 0:24 | Now, although I definitely do not condone leaving things to the last minute, | 现在,虽然我绝对不会容忍 把事情留给最后一分钟, |
| 0:28 | I do agree that systems do make things that are not so enjoyable be a lot more efficient and therefore fun. | 我确实同意,系统确实使那些不那么令人愉快的事情更有效率,因而更有趣。 |
| 0:34 | Today, I wanted to share the exact system that I used to write good university essays in under three hours | 今天,我想分享我之前在三个小时内 写好大学论文的确切系统 |
| 0:40 | by doing a full walkthrough of an essay with you here. | 和你们一起完成一篇论文 |
| 0:43 | So I have my computer in front of me and let's get started. | ┮и筿福и玡 и秨 |
| 0:45 | So first things first, I am going to be using Notion. | 所以,首先,我要使用诺特。 |
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| 1 | Against all advice, I did work full-time during my first three years of studying medicine at university. | 不顾一切的建议,我在大学念医的前三年,确实做了全职工作. |
| 2 | And although I'm not going to get into whether that was the best decision in the world in this video today, | 虽然我不打算 进入是否 这是世界上最好的决定 在今天的视频, |
| 3 | as you can imagine, it did mean that when it came to completing university projects, I didn't always have the luxury of time. | 你可以想象,它确实意味着 当它完成大学项目, 我并不总是有 奢侈的时间。 |
| 4 | So whether I liked it or not, I did have to come up with systems to do things fastly, efficiently, and without procrastinating. | 因此无论我是否喜欢,我确实必须想出一些系统来快速,高效地做事情,并且不要拖延. |
| 5 | Now, although I definitely do not condone leaving things to the last minute, | 现在,虽然我绝对不会容忍 把事情留给最后一分钟, |
| 6 | I do agree that systems do make things that are not so enjoyable be a lot more efficient and therefore fun. | 我确实同意,系统确实使那些不那么令人愉快的事情更有效率,因而更有趣。 |
| 7 | Today, I wanted to share the exact system that I used to write good university essays in under three hours | 今天,我想分享我之前在三个小时内 写好大学论文的确切系统 |
| 8 | by doing a full walkthrough of an essay with you here. | 和你们一起完成一篇论文 |
| 9 | So I have my computer in front of me and let's get started. | ┮и筿福и玡 и秨 |
| 10 | So first things first, I am going to be using Notion. | 所以,首先,我要使用诺特。 |
| 11 | This is because it is literally the best app in the world. | 这是因为它是世界上最好的应用。 |
| 12 | I have a whole second frame on it. | 我有一个完整的第二个框架。 |
| 13 | If you want to check that out, there's a video somewhere if you're into that. | 如果你想看看,如果你想看的话 某个地方有录像 |
| 14 | But basically, Notion is free, it's clean, it's effective. | 但基本上,概念是自由的,是干净的,是有效的. |
| 15 | It's absolutely, in my opinion, the best app for students. | 这绝对是,我认为,最好的应用 对于学生。 |
| 16 | I can probably use this system with something else, but I'm going to be doing my walkthrough in Notion. | 我也许可以用这个系统 用别的东西, 但我会做我的行走 在诺特。 |
| 17 | I'll break down every single step in a way that should hopefully be easy to replicate. | 我会分解每个步骤 希望可以很容易复制。 |
| 18 | So let's say our essay title is The Importance of Teaching Skills in Medical Professional Practice. | 我们的论文题目是"医学专业实践中教学技能的重要性"。 |
| 19 | This is an essay I had to write last year. | 这是我去年写的一篇论文 |
| 20 | The first thing I'm going to do is create a database page on Notion. | 我要做的第一件事是创建一个关于Notion的数据库页面. |
| 21 | Now, this sounds really complicated. | 这听起来很复杂。 |
| 22 | All it really is is a table, so it's quite easy to work with. | 它真正只是一张桌子, 所以它相当容易工作。 |
| 23 | Now, the reason I do this is because I absolutely hate writing essays top to bottom. | 现在,我这样做的原因是 我绝对讨厌写文章 从头到尾。 |
| 24 | I actually write them left to right, and I'm going to explain how this happens. | 我把它们写在左到右, 我要解释这是怎么回事。 |
| 25 | I think it's a hugely heavy lift to write a full essay, so I kind of break it up into very many small bits. | 我认为写一篇完整的论文是一个非常沉重的电梯, 所以我把它分成许多小部分。 |
| 26 | The first breakup that I will do is obviously an introduction, body, and conclusion, | 我第一次分手显然是介绍、身体和结论 |
| 27 | because we have to start, write, and wrap up our essay. | 因为我们必须开始,写, 并结束我们的论文。 |
| 28 | Now, there's an extra step that I do here that I feel is very important. | 现在,有一个额外的步骤,我在这里做,我觉得是非常重要的。 |
| 29 | I feel an easy way that people lose points with their essays is not looking at the marking scheme. | 我觉得一个容易的方法,人们在他们的论文中失去分数 并不是看标记计划。 |
| 30 | And no matter how elaborate, beautiful, how many amazing points you make | 无论你有多细腻 多么美丽 多少惊人的分数 |
| 31 | and how many great quotes that you use in your essay, | 在你的论文中,你引用了许多伟大的引言, |
| 32 | if you are not ticking all of the criteria in the marking points, | 如果你不在标记点上勾选所有标准, |
| 33 | you are obviously going to lose a lot of marks. | 你显然会失去很多标记。 |
| 34 | And on the flip side, if you tick every single point in the marking scheme, | 在反面 如果你在标记计划上每分每分 |
| 35 | even if you haven't written an amazing essay, | 即使你没有写一篇很棒的文章 |
| 36 | you are guaranteed a pass or even a really good mark. | 你得到一个通行证,甚至一个非常好的标记。 |
| 37 | So I go to the marking scheme and make sure I do all of them. | 所以我去标记计划 确保我做的全部。 |
| 38 | Sometimes I have essays which don't have such a delicate marking scheme, | 有时候我还有一些论文 没有这么微妙的标记计划 |
| 39 | and in this case, I will have to come up with it myself. | 在这种情况下,我必须自己想出办法 |
| 40 | Okay, what do I think this professor would like to assess me on? | 好吧,我想这位教授想怎么评价我? |
| 41 | And I put those points in the body. | 我把这些点放在身体。 |
| 42 | This should take about five to 10 minutes, | 这大约需要5到10分钟 |
| 43 | depending on if you are copy pasting these from somewhere else, | 取决于你是否从别的地方 复制粘贴这些, |
| 44 | or if I'm just spending a few minutes kind of trying to come up with them myself. | 或者如果我只是花 几分钟 那种试图提出他们自己。 |
| 45 | I don't spend a lot of time on this part. | 我不花很多时间在这个部分。 |
| 46 | Step number two is when we start to branch out a bit. | 第二步是我们开始分身的时候 |
| 47 | So I'll be thinking about the introduction itself. | 所以我会考虑 介绍本身。 |
| 48 | This is where I set the scene for the essay. | 这是我为这篇论文设定的场景. |
| 49 | The way that I imagine introductions is like, | 我想象的介绍是这样的 |
| 50 | I'm having a conversation with someone who's in front of me, | 我在和在我面前的人谈话 |
| 51 | who does not know the title of my essay, | 谁不知道我的论文的标题, |
| 52 | and I'm not allowed to say the title of my essay, | 我不能说出我论文的标题, |
| 53 | but I can talk about whatever. | 但我可以谈论什么。 |
| 54 | So I just kind of set the context in a way | 所以,我只是有点 设置上下文的方式 |
| 55 | that I try to make the person ask the question, | 我试图让一个人问问题, |
| 56 | which is the title of the essay itself, | 这是论文本身的标题, |
| 57 | if that makes any sense and if you can write your mind around that. | 如果这有什么意义 如果你可以把想法写在心里 |
| 58 | So in this case, I think I'm going to start by writing | 因此,在这种情况下, 我想我会开始写 |
| 59 | why it's important for a doctor to be a teacher, | 为什么医生做老师很重要 |
| 60 | and that's going to be my first paragraph, | 这将是我的第一段, |
| 61 | and my second paragraph is going to talk about | 而我的第二段将谈论 |
| 62 | why I'm writing this essay at all and kind of the experiences that I did, | 为什么我写这篇文章 和那种我的经验, |
| 63 | and I think this would be fine for the introduction. | 我想这对介绍会有好处。 |
| 64 | Now, within the body, | 现在,在体内, |
| 65 | I'm going to go to every single assessment point | 我会去每个评估点 |
| 66 | and create an aim for every single paragraph, | 并为每个段落规定一个目标, |
| 67 | and some of these assessment points won't stand on paragraphs as their own, | 而其中的一些评估点 将不会站在段落作为自己的, |
| 68 | so I'll just kind of remove them. | 所以,我将只是一种 取出它们。 |
| 69 | Some of them I might want to merge together, | 其中一些我可能想合并在一起, |
| 70 | but for every single one, | 但对于每一个人, |
| 71 | I'm going to see if they can stand as a future paragraph. | 我去看看他们能不能作为未来的段落站立. |
| 72 | So for the conclusion, I do the exact same thing. | 最后,我也是这么做的。 |
| 73 | I think I want to end this essay by talking about | 我想通过讨论结束这篇论文 |
| 74 | the wider context of higher education | 高等教育的大背景 |
| 75 | and its implications for professional medical practice. | 及其对专业医疗实践的影响。 |
| 76 | Then I'm also going to talk about somehow how this experience has changed me. | 接下来,我还要谈谈这种经历如何改变了我。 |
| 77 | This column two is now done, | 第二栏已经写好了 |
| 78 | and this should take about 20 minutes, I think, | 这大概需要20分钟,我想, |
| 79 | to kind of make these points and clean these things up. | 来做这些点 清理这些东西。 |
| 80 | It's only about 10 sentences that I'm actually writing, | 我实际上只写了十句 |
| 81 | but it does take a bit of thinking time. | 但它确实需要一些思考时间。 |
| 82 | Step number three is where we start to have fun. | 第三步就是我们开始玩的地方 |
| 83 | For every single aim I created, | 对于我创造的每一个目标, |
| 84 | I'm going to make a central core argument for each paragraph. | 每段我都要提出核心论点. |
| 85 | I think where essays don't look very good | 我觉得那些散文看起来不太好 |
| 86 | is where paragraphs are quite wishy-washy, | 即其中的段落, |
| 87 | and when I read them, | 当我读到它们, |
| 88 | I'm not sure what they are saying or what point they are trying to make. | 我不知道他们在说什么 也不知道他们想说什么 |
| 89 | So trying to approach it from the other way around, | 所以想从另一边走过来 |
| 90 | where you make the central point of the paragraph first, | 其中你首先提出段落的中心点, |
| 91 | and then you build the paragraph, | 然后,你建立段落, |
| 92 | ensures that everything that you're writing has a central aim | 确保你写的所有东西都有一个中心目标 |
| 93 | and is very coherent and logical. | 并且非常连贯和合乎逻辑。 |
| 94 | So for every single aim, | 所以每个目标 |
| 95 | and this can be either the marking criteria | 这可以是标记标准 |
| 96 | or it can be the things that I put in the introduction and conclusion, | 也可以是我在介绍和结论中提出的东西, |
| 97 | I am going to make one single argument. | 我要提出一个论点。 |
| 98 | And these arguments don't all have to come from my brain. | 而这些争论并不都来自我的大脑。 |
| 99 | Very often, I like using quotes here, I like using studies, | 经常,我喜欢这里的引用, 我喜欢学习, |
| 100 | I like using kind of experiences of my own, | 我喜欢用我自己的经验 |
| 101 | so it can be very different things. | 所以它可以是非常不同的事物。 |
| 102 | I cheat on this point because I have a second brain, | 我骗人是因为我有第二个大脑 |
| 103 | so I have all of these quotes and studies in one place already, | 因此,我已经把所有这些引文和研究 在一个地方, |
| 104 | so I've had to double the time that it takes me to do this | 所以我不得不花两倍的时间做这个 |
| 105 | in this three-hour estimation. | 这三小时的估计。 |
| 106 | For example, if I want to talk about the importance of being a doctor in medicine, | 例如,如果我想谈谈做医生的重要性, |
| 107 | I like this Richard Feynman quote which says, | 我喜欢这个理查德·费曼的话 |
| 108 | a young man doesn't realize how much time it takes to prepare good lectures | 一个年轻人不知道 要花多少时间准备好的讲座 |
| 109 | for the first time, especially. | 特别是第一次 |
| 110 | It kind of talks about how students or people who haven't taught before | 说到以前没教过书的学生 |
| 111 | don't appreciate how difficult and important education is. | 不理解教育有多困难和重要。 |
| 112 | And therefore, I think this is a quote for someone famous. | 因此,我认为这是一位名人的话。 |
| 113 | It is written well, and it also makes a good point. | 它写得很好,也讲得很清楚。 |
| 114 | So I'm going to be using this quote as my central argument for my first paragraph. | 所以我要用这个引文作为我第一段的中心论点. |
| 115 | And I'll do the same thing for every single other paragraph. | 我也会为每一个段落做同样的事情。 |
| 116 | I spend a lot of time on PubMed here trying to find studies | 我花了很多时间在普布迈德在这里寻找研究 |
| 117 | that have findings or explorations which are relevant | 具有相关结论或勘探的 |
| 118 | to the points that I want to make in my study. | 关于我想在书房里表达的观点。 |
| 119 | And very importantly here, I'll also add another column with the sources. | 非常重要的是,我还要再增加一栏 |
| 120 | So for every single quote or every single study, | 所以,对于每一个引用 或每一个研究, |
| 121 | I will have the full source of it so I can use it in my kind of resources | 我会有它的全部来源,这样我就可以用它 在我的资源类型 |
| 122 | in the end of my essay. | 在我的论文的最后。 |
| 123 | So for me, this takes a maximum half an hour, | 对我来说 这最多需要半小时 |
| 124 | but I can see how it can take up to an hour. | 但我能看出来怎么用上一个小时 |
| 125 | So at this point, we have done one and a half hour of our essay writing already. | 此时此刻,我们已经做了一个半小时的散文。 |
| 126 | And this is where we get to step number four. | 这就是我们进入第四步的地方。 |
| 127 | And this is the only time where I actually start writing the words of my essay. | 这是我唯一一次真正开始写作文章的文字。 |
| 128 | And why I find the system works so well is because | 我为什么觉得这个系统运作得这么好 因为 |
| 129 | if I were to start from scratch, I would have to write kind of | 如果我从头开始,我会不得不写那种 |
| 130 | a whole essay based on nothing. | 整篇散文都是凭空写的 |
| 131 | But because I have all of these kind of rows done, | 但是,因为我已经做了所有这些行, |
| 132 | what that means is that it's kind of like I have someone who's just prepared, | 意思是,它有点像 我有一个谁只是准备, |
| 133 | most of my essay for me already. | 大部分我的文章已经给我了 |
| 134 | And I don't have to write a full essay. | 我不用写一篇完整的论文 |
| 135 | All I have to write is paragraphs based on a single argument, | 我只需要写一些段落 仅仅根据一个论点 |
| 136 | which is very easy to do. | 这很容易 |
| 137 | So for example, for the introduction itself, | 例如,关于导言本身, |
| 138 | if I said I want to talk about why education in medicine is important | 如果我说我想谈谈 为什么医学教育很重要 |
| 139 | using this quote from Richard Feynman, | 引用理查德·费曼的话 |
| 140 | that actually becomes a very easy paragraph to write. | 这实际上成了一个非常容易写的段落。 |
| 141 | It's only going to be a few sentences of me kind of elaborating | 这只会是几句话 我有点细心 |
| 142 | on this aim that I've already made. | 这个目标我已经做了。 |
| 143 | And I've done the same thing everywhere. | 我到处都做了同样的事情 |
| 144 | So for example, I'm talking about the importance of using imagery, | 举例来说,我指的是使用图像的重要性, |
| 145 | in education based on the fact that there's a study | 在教育中,基于一个事实,有一个研究 |
| 146 | that found that using images improves learning so much. | 发现利用图像可以改善学习 |
| 147 | All I need to do is just to elaborate on that | 我只要解释一下 |
| 148 | and add some extra words and verbs and sentences. | 并添加一些额外的词和动词和句子. |
| 149 | It's not actually very hard to do. | 这其实不是很难做到的。 |
| 150 | This honestly for me makes writing endlessly easier. | 老实说,这让我写作更加容易 |
| 151 | And this part usually takes me about an hour maximum to do. | 这部分通常需要我最多一个小时的时间。 |
| 152 | And when I am finally done with this, I feel super, super relieved. | 当我终于结束这一切,我觉得超级,超级解脱。 |
| 153 | All I do is take all the paragraphs that I've written, | 我所做的就是拿走我写的所有段落 |
| 154 | which are the actual essay content, and I put them together. | 我把它们拼凑在一起, |
| 155 | But at this point, I'm kind of blind to the essay. | 但此时,我对散文有点视而不见. |
| 156 | I have the same thing when I'm working for something for a long time. | 我为某事工作很长一段时间时也有同样的事情. |
| 157 | So when I finish a painting, I can't actually see it normally. | 所以当我完成一幅画的时候, 我无法正常地看到它。 |
| 158 | And when I finish an essay, I can't actually see the essay | 当我写完一篇论文时, 我无法真正看到这篇论文 |
| 159 | because I'm too used to the words. | 因为我太习惯这些词了 |
| 160 | So I kind of need to take a break. | 所以我需要休息一下。 |
| 161 | And a few hours of this will do, | 几个小时就够了 |
| 162 | but a few days is absolutely perfect, | 但几天是绝对完美的, |
| 163 | depending on how last minute this task has been left to be. | 取决于这一任务的最后一刻。 |
| 164 | So I'll kind of step away from my essay | 所以我会离开我的论文 |
| 165 | and I'll only come back to it later | 我以后再回来 |
| 166 | and give it another half an hour where I read through it, | 再给我半小时读一遍 |
| 167 | make sure everything makes sense. | 确保一切都有道理。 |
| 168 | I might rearrange things, | 我可能会重新安排事情 |
| 169 | delete or add some sentences here and there, | 删除或添加一些句子, |
| 170 | and make sure it is all coherent. | 并且确保一切一致。 |
| 171 | All my sources are already listed, | 我的所有线人已经列出 |
| 172 | so I can just copy and paste those too. | 所以我也可以复制和粘贴这些。 |
| 173 | And yep, that is three hours of work and a full essay done, | 是的,这是三个小时的工作 和一份完整的论文, |
| 174 | which has all of the marking criteria sorted. | 它有所有标记标准排序。 |
| 175 | It has all the resources there already. | 它已经拥有所有的资源。 |
| 176 | It's kind of creative because it has a bunch of extra quotes | 这有点创意,因为它有一堆额外的引文 |
| 177 | and kind of fun things in it. | 和一些有趣的东西在里面。 |
| 178 | It is structured well. | 它的结构很好。 |
| 179 | Every single paragraph is making a point, | 每个段落都表明 |
| 180 | which is tied to the aim of the essay itself. | 这和论文的目的有关 |
| 181 | So yeah, it's kind of hard to go wrong using this method. | 所以,使用这种方法很难出错。 |
| 182 | So beyond the essay itself, | 因此,除了论文本身, |
| 183 | this is actually a very special video for me | 这其实是一个非常特别的视频给我 |
| 184 | because it is my first Notion sponsorship | 因为这是我第一次提名 |
| 185 | and I am endlessly grateful for them. | 我永远感激他们 |
| 186 | I knew during this video | 我在这段录像中就知道 |
| 187 | that I wanted to do something related to education | 我想做一些与教育有关的事情 |
| 188 | because even though I have my completely over-the-top uses | 因为即使我有我 完全超额用途 |
| 189 | for Notion, actually it's just the best thing | 对于Notion,其实这是最好的一件事 |
| 190 | for students to use in general. | 供学生普遍使用。 |
| 191 | And I thought that if I were to make a Notion video, | 我想,如果我要制作一个感官视频, |
| 192 | it would have to be for students. | 必须是学生的 |
| 193 | So yeah, here it is. | 所以,是这里。 |
| 194 | I hope this made sense to anyone else. | 我希望这对任何人都有意义。 |
| 195 | I'll be going back to university next year, | 我明年要回大学了 |
| 196 | so I will definitely be needing any tips | 所以我肯定需要任何小费 |
| 197 | for essay writing and for studying. | 写作和学习 |
| 198 | So if you have anything to share, | 如果你有什么要分享的 |
| 199 | please feel free to do so in the comments. | 请在评论中自由发言。 |
| 200 | If you haven't already signed up for Notion, | 如果你还没报名参加Notion |
| 201 | I'd be very surprised, | 我会很惊讶的, |
| 202 | but there will be a link in my description | 但我的描述中会有联系 |
| 203 | which will give you free access to the app. | 它可以免费访问应用程序。 |
| 204 | But otherwise, thank you so much | 但是要不然,多谢 |
| 205 | for spending this time with me. | 陪我度过这段时光 |
| 206 | I hope you have a wonderful rest of your day. | 希望你今天有美好的休息时间 |
| 207 | Be kind to yourself and others | 对自己和其他人好一点 |
| 208 | and don't believe everything you think | 不要相信一切你认为 |
| 209 | and loads, loads of luck with your essays in university. | 和负载, 负载运气 在你的论文在大学。 |
| 210 | Bye. | 再见。 |
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