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| 0:00 | Hi, everyone in today's video, I'm gonna talk all things personal statement | 嗨,今天录影带里的每个人, 我要谈所有的事情 个人声明 |
| 0:04 | So I will just assume that from this point on | 所以,我只能假设,从这一点开始 |
| 0:06 | People who are watching are only those who are interested in writing the personal statement | 正在观看的人只是那些有兴趣写个人声明的人 |
| 0:11 | Because I'm just gonna cut straight to the chase | 因为我会直截了当的追逐 |
| 0:12 | I will do my best to make this video a very comprehensive guides personal statement from beginning to end | 我将尽我最大的努力,让这段录像从头到尾都成为一个非常全面的个人发言指南。 |
| 0:18 | sort of a video that I wish I could have watched or I had to watch when I was writing my personal statement because | 那种视频 我希望我能看 或者我不得不看 当我写我的个人声明,因为 |
| 0:24 | Obviously there are resources, but I still think they're like maybe a bit limited and we don't hear enough | 显然有资源, 但我仍然认为,他们 可能有点有限,我们听不够 |
| 0:29 | First-hand stories from people who actually went through the application process. | 真实经历申请过程的人的第一手故事. |
| 0:32 | So I said it's gonna be all things personal statement | 所以我说,这将是所有的事情 个人声明 |
| 0:35 | What is it how to prepare to write it do's and don'ts tips and at the end? | 如何准备写它做和不做小费,最后呢? |
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| 1 | Hi, everyone in today's video, I'm gonna talk all things personal statement | 嗨,今天录影带里的每个人, 我要谈所有的事情 个人声明 |
| 2 | So I will just assume that from this point on | 所以,我只能假设,从这一点开始 |
| 3 | People who are watching are only those who are interested in writing the personal statement | 正在观看的人只是那些有兴趣写个人声明的人 |
| 4 | Because I'm just gonna cut straight to the chase | 因为我会直截了当的追逐 |
| 5 | I will do my best to make this video a very comprehensive guides personal statement from beginning to end | 我将尽我最大的努力,让这段录像从头到尾都成为一个非常全面的个人发言指南。 |
| 6 | sort of a video that I wish I could have watched or I had to watch when I was writing my personal statement because | 那种视频 我希望我能看 或者我不得不看 当我写我的个人声明,因为 |
| 7 | Obviously there are resources, but I still think they're like maybe a bit limited and we don't hear enough | 显然有资源, 但我仍然认为,他们 可能有点有限,我们听不够 |
| 8 | First-hand stories from people who actually went through the application process. | 真实经历申请过程的人的第一手故事. |
| 9 | So I said it's gonna be all things personal statement | 所以我说,这将是所有的事情 个人声明 |
| 10 | What is it how to prepare to write it do's and don'ts tips and at the end? | 如何准备写它做和不做小费,最后呢? |
| 11 | I'm also gonna read my personal statement. | 我还要读我的个人声明 |
| 12 | So if that's the only part you're interested then you can like skip to it | 所以,如果这是你唯一感兴趣的部分 那你可以喜欢跳过它 |
| 13 | Look on the timestamps | 看看时间戳 |
| 14 | So a personal statement is basically a paper that you have to write when you submit your application to a UK | 因此,个人陈述基本上是你向英国递交申请时必须撰写的论文. |
| 15 | University so when you apply to university, you not only give your predicted or achieved grades | 因此,大学,当你申请大学, 你不仅给出你的预测或达到的成绩 |
| 16 | But you only also write your personal statement | 但你也只写个人声明 |
| 17 | Which I would say is equally if not more important like facet of your application than grades because grades are basically like a binary | 我想说的是,即使不是比成绩更重要的 也一样,因为成绩基本上就像二进制 |
| 18 | Thing where you either have the grades that are required or you don't | 你要么有需要的成绩 要么没有 |
| 19 | Whereas personal statement can really distinguish you from other people who have the same grades as you especially for competitive universities | 而个人声明可以真正区分你 和其他与你同年级的人,特别是竞争大学 |
| 20 | So I would definitely definitely advise to like pay attention to personal statement | 所以,我绝对建议大家注意一下个人发言 |
| 21 | Do not write it in one week and really devote your time to it | 不要在一个星期内写出来,并真正投入你的时间去写 |
| 22 | If you really have the ambition of like attending more competitive universities | 如果你真的有志于上更有竞争力的大学 |
| 23 | So the way I like to see it is personal statement is sort of your way of not only showing your like high achievements or | 所以,我喜欢看它的方式是个人陈述 排序你的方式 不仅显示你 像高成就或 |
| 24 | Grades which is also like a part of the personal statement, but I would say it's just like one max two paragraphs | 成绩也像个人发言的一部分 但我想说 就像最多两段 |
| 25 | while I think what's even more important is showing off to like the university admission people that | 我觉得更重要的就是 喜欢大学录取的人 |
| 26 | You're actually interested in the topic and be that you've done your research | 其实你对这个话题感兴趣 并且你已经做了你的研究 |
| 27 | you know what the course entails and like what kind of candidate are they looking for and you actually | 你知道这门课包含什么 喜欢什么样的候选人 他们在找,你实际上 |
| 28 | Like show active passion and interest in the subject | 就像对这个主题表现出积极的热情和兴趣 |
| 29 | You're gonna be studying if you get in of course and as I said, it is very very important because for those higher ranked universities | 狦秈ㄓ 穦厩策 碞钩и弧妓 |
| 30 | A lot of candidates will have the grades. | 许多考生会有成绩. |
| 31 | So for the admission team | 所以,对于录取团队 |
| 32 | It's not even that impressive that a person has like achieved a one top percent of like grades in this school | 一个人在学分上达到最高的一分 这并不令人印象深刻 |
| 33 | and that's why it is your kind of only chance to show the kind of person you are and also like why is it you that | 这就是为什么这是你唯一的机会 显示你是什么人 也喜欢为什么是你 |
| 34 | Should be studying this subject and not another person with your qualifications | 应该学习这个科目 而不是另一个有你资格的人 |
| 35 | So really like make the best use out of it | 所以,真的喜欢 最好的利用它 |
| 36 | And in this video I'm gonna show you how to do it and how to do it in a compelling way | 在这部影片中,我要告诉你如何做 如何以令人信服的方式做 |
| 37 | from what I remember when you apply to universities in the UK the deadline for applications is | 从我记得 当你向英国大学申请时 申请的截止日期是 |
| 38 | 15th of January unless you apply to either Oxford or Cambridge, which I think the deadline is 15th of | 1月15日,除非你申请 牛津或剑桥, 我认为最后期限是15日 |
| 39 | October, but I personally did not apply to either of those universities | 10月,但我个人没有申请 这两所大学 |
| 40 | so I think I sub into my application like middle of November because I just wanted to cap it like out of the way and | 所以我想我像11月中旬一样潜入我的申请 因为我只是想把它盖起来 像挡道, |
| 41 | Then to be able to focus on my like exam prep and because I really put emphasis on studying early as I do with everything | 然后能专注于我的考试准备 并且因为我真正强调学习 早在我做的一切 |
| 42 | Because that's my I feel like that's one of my like biggest keys to success in terms of whether it's like academia or career | 因为我觉得那是我成功最大的关键之一 无论是学术还是事业 |
| 43 | I think you give yourself the highest chances if you actually do your prep | 我想你给自己最大的机会 如果你真的做你的准备 |
| 44 | Well and give yourself enough time to not only like prepare and write the paper itself | 给自己足够的时间 不仅喜欢准备和写报纸本身 |
| 45 | But also have other people give you feedback and from what I can remember I started around like I definitely started doing it in summer | 但也有其他人给你回馈 从我记忆中 我开始就像夏天一样 |
| 46 | Maybe it was I don't remember it was like July or August overall | 可能我不记得了 就像七月或八月一样 |
| 47 | I would say I wrote it for like two months on and off | 我会说,我写了两个月 上下 |
| 48 | Obviously it wasn't like every day a couple of hours work | 很明显 不是每天都有几个小时的工作 |
| 49 | But I did pretty consistently and devoted definitely devoted a lot of my like hours of work into it | 但我一直坚持不懈地投入到工作里 |
| 50 | So before you actually sit down and start typing your personal statement on the computer | 所以在你坐下来 开始在电脑上打个人声明之前 |
| 51 | There are things you have to do before I think and it does as I said require preparation and the first thing that I would like | 有些事情你必须做 在我思考之前,它做 就像我说的需要准备,第一件事我想 |
| 52 | Highly highly highly recommend you do is read at least two books | 高度推荐你至少读两本书 |
| 53 | But I would say like three four is the best books that relate to your subject of interest | 但我会说,像三四 是最好的书籍 与你感兴趣的主题 |
| 54 | So for me was economics obviously, but it can be basically any subject | 对我来说,经济是很明显的, 但基本上它可以是任何主题 |
| 55 | You need to do your reading beforehand because as one of the I think easiest but also the best strategies for writing your personal statement is | 你必须提前阅读 因为我认为写你个人声明的最好策略之一 |
| 56 | Mentioning the books you've read and also | 提到你读过的书,还有 |
| 57 | like inputting your own opinions and | 喜欢输入自己的意见和 |
| 58 | Reflections on them but in order to do that like effectively and actually know what you're talking about | 对他们进行反思,但为了做到这样有效 并且真正知道你在说什么 |
| 59 | You actually have to read those books | 你一定要看那些书 |
| 60 | I would say you don't have to read it from the first to last page because if you're not doing an interview like I | 我会说,你不必从第一页读到最后一页 因为如果你不做一个采访像我一样 |
| 61 | Personally did not do any interviews | 个人没有做任何采访 |
| 62 | My application was based solely on my grades and my personal statement you are not gonna be asked about it | 我的申请是完全根据我的成绩和我的私人声明的,你不会被问到 |
| 63 | Probably like about your knowledge of the book. | 也许像你对这本书的了解 |
| 64 | It's totally different with like Oxbridge | 和牛桥不一样 |
| 65 | That's why I also didn't apply there because I think the interview process would just eat me alive | 所以我没有申请,因为我觉得面试过程会把我活活吃掉 |
| 66 | But you need to remember that people who review our application are experts and they will probably have a good liar detector | 但你要记住,那些审查我们申请的人 是专家 他们可能有一个很好的骗子探测器 |
| 67 | So if you're just gonna try to bullshit your way through it and mention books such as the wealth of nations by Adam Smith | 所以,如果你只是试图 胡说八道 通过它,并提到书籍 如国家财富 亚当・斯密 |
| 68 | They're probably gonna be able to | 他们可能可以 |
| 69 | Notice that you actually did not read it and also there is not much merit to just mention a huge economic books | 注意你实际上没有读过, 也没什么好处 仅仅提到一个巨大的经济书籍 |
| 70 | While it's not really realistic that you would actually like reach out for them and read them | 虽然不现实,但你其实想 伸手去读他们 |
| 71 | So as I said, like if you have no idea where to start with your personal statement | 所以,正如我说的,就像如果你不知道 从哪里开始 你的个人陈述 |
| 72 | just go to your local library and like borrow a couple books on the topic like | 去你的当地图书馆 借几本书 |
| 73 | from a variety of subject or fields within that subject and just give them a read and it's not really about like | 从各种主题或领域 该主题,只是给他们一个阅读, 它不是真的喜欢 |
| 74 | finishing those books | 完成那些书 |
| 75 | but actually taking out something from them and when you read them through definitely remember to like highlight things that you think like you may | 但实际上从他们身上取出一些东西 当你读到它们时 绝对记得你喜欢突出的东西 |
| 76 | mention in the personal statement or just write your own notes like do whatever you want to but | 或写你自己的笔记 就像做你想做的事一样 |
| 77 | Just have at least like a solid base of things you want to mention in your personal statement that relate to those books | 只要有至少像一个坚实的基础 事情,你想提到 在你的私人声明 与那些书 |
| 78 | and I would I would say that the reason that this | 我想说,这个原因 |
| 79 | like strategy to write your personal statement is that important because it gives you an advantage in case you like haven't had that much like | 就像写个人声明的策略 是非常重要的 因为它给了你一个优势 在你喜欢没有 喜欢 |
| 80 | Experience or extra curricular activities. | 经验或课外活动. |
| 81 | So if you haven't like won 10 competitions | 所以如果你不喜欢参加10场比赛 |
| 82 | you get to actually show your interest and understanding of the topic without having to like | 你只要表现出对这个话题的兴趣和理解 就不必喜欢 |
| 83 | You know name drop or do a lot of like showing off just show off your intelligence through the literature you read and as I said constantly | 你知道名字掉下来,或者做很多喜欢炫耀 只是展示你的智慧 通过你读的文献, |
| 84 | Remind the people who read your personal statement that you are passionate and interested in the subject | 提醒那些读你个人声明的人 你对这个话题充满激情和兴趣 |
| 85 | You're gonna be learning because that's the key idea behind the personal statement | 你会学会的 因为那是个人陈述背后的关键想法 |
| 86 | And my second tip when it comes to prep for personal statement would be to join project access | 我准备个人陈述的第二个提示是加入项目访问 |
| 87 | Which is this student initiative where people who already attend universities are recruited as like mentors? | 已经上大学的人被聘为导师, |
| 88 | And if you apply for project access you get to have one mentor assigned to you who usually studies the subject you study | 如果你申请项目访问,你得到一个导师 分配给你,谁通常学习 你研究的科目 |
| 89 | It can be the case that they study at your University of choice | 他们可能在你所选择的大学学习 |
| 90 | So say like Oxford or LSE but it can also be the same subject | 所以说,像牛津或LSE 但它也可以是同一个主题 |
| 91 | Just like a different university depending on like the team they have and I use project access when I was writing my personal statement | 就像一个不同的大学 取决于他们的团队 我使用项目访问 当我写我的个人声明 |
| 92 | And although I want I remember I wanted to get into LSE the most and I got a person from UCL | 尽管我想,我记得我最想进入LSE 我得到了一个人从UCL |
| 93 | But they were of great help | 但是他们帮了大忙 |
| 94 | With my personal statement, I think they really like obviously they don't do the job for you, but they give you feedback | 凭我个人的口供,我觉得他们真的很喜欢 显然他们不为你做这个工作,但他们给你反馈 |
| 95 | they can help you with writing and they're just like there to kind of | 他们可以帮助你写作 他们就像在那里 |
| 96 | Oversee this process because usually like at least in my school like teachers did not care at all about our personal statements | 监督这个过程 因为通常至少在我的学校 像老师一样 根本不关心我们的个人言论 |
| 97 | Or like what we did with our university application | 或者像我们做的 大学申请 |
| 98 | So it was good to have someone older than me who already went through that process kind of got me through it | 所以,我很高兴有一个比我年长的人 谁已经经历了这个过程 让我度过了它。 |
| 99 | And I actually also like volunteer to be like a project access mentor this year | 我其实也喜欢志愿者成为今年的项目导师 |
| 100 | Like because I already got into uni | 喜欢因为我已经进入uni |
| 101 | Just because like I wanted to kind of give back to the community and because I felt like a part of my success was | 就像我想回报社区一样 也因为我觉得自己成功的一部分 |
| 102 | The mentorship I received I again like I want to be that kind of person for the next years like applicants | 我得到的导师,我再次喜欢 我想成为这样的人 在今后几年 像申请人 |
| 103 | Okay | 还好 |
| 104 | So now let's cut to the chase and and actually go through the step-by-step process of how you should write your personal statement | 现在,让我们切入追逐 并实际上通过一步步的过程 你如何写你的个人声明 |
| 105 | I think I need to emphasize that this is just the way I have written my personal statement in so I'm like gonna go through | 我想我需要强调,这只是我写个人声明的方式 所以我喜欢去经历 |
| 106 | Which is probably not the only like way to write them | 这也许不是写他们的唯一方法 |
| 107 | But if you read more of other people's personal statements, you will definitely get the gist of what's the overall structure or like patterns within them | 但是,如果你读更多的别人的个人声明, 你一定会得到的要点 什么是整体结构 或者喜欢的图案 |
| 108 | Although there are not very strict rules as like what you need to include or like which what each paragraph needs to be about | 虽然没有非常严格的规则,比如你需要包括什么或什么类似什么是每一款需要涉及什么 |
| 109 | There is a general like I would say distinction. | 有一个将军像我要说区分。 |
| 110 | So because I just have experience with my home personal statement | 所以,因为我只是有经验 我的家个人陈述 |
| 111 | I will explain you what I did in each paragraph | 我会解释我在每一段所做的一切 |
| 112 | So my personal statement had five paragraphs and the first two I devoted to writing about as I said books that I've read and | 所以我的个人陈述有五段 和前两段 我致力于写作 |
| 113 | Not only like as I said, not only showing off that I've read them and that I understood them | 不仅如我所说 不仅炫耀我读过 理解过 |
| 114 | But also kind of showing how like oh like this book sparked my interest about this topic | 但也有种展示 像这样的书 让我对这个话题感兴趣 |
| 115 | And that's why I like I don't know | 这就是为什么我喜欢 我不知道 |
| 116 | I discovered I want to study economics or reading this book made me realize XYZ and this is why | 我发现我想学习经济学 或者读这本书 让我意识到XYZ |
| 117 | ABC so in the first two paragraphs not only did write about these books | ABC在前两段不仅写了这些书 |
| 118 | But I very much linked it to my economic knowledge so far and also like mentioning several reasons for which why I'll just study economics | 但我一直把它和我的经济学知识联系起来 也喜欢提到一些原因,为什么我只研究经济学 |
| 119 | And also what interests me about economics more specifically because obviously you're not gonna be interested in the whole subject | 更具体地说,我对经济学感兴趣的是什么 因为你显然不会对整个话题感兴趣 |
| 120 | But I think it's a good strategy to just show off | 但我觉得这样炫耀是个好策略 |
| 121 | Even if there's just like one specific field that you're really passionate about and you're like several books on it | 即使有一个你非常热衷的具体领域 并且你喜欢一些书在上面 |
| 122 | Then show it all showed up that you have | 那就展示一下你已经出现的一切 |
| 123 | Actual genuine interest in like a facet of the subject | 实际真正兴趣,如主题的一面 |
| 124 | My third paragraph was about the skills that made me suitable for the course | 我的第三段是关于让我适合课程的技能 |
| 125 | So in my case economics | 所以就我而言 经济学 |
| 126 | I wrote about my mathematical abilities and the contests I've won and why I actually enjoy mathematics so much and why I think it's important | 我写了我的数学能力和我赢得的比赛 和为什么我真正喜欢数学 |
| 127 | So sort of that was like a skill that is very necessary for an economics degree | 有点像经济学位所必需的技能 |
| 128 | And I decided it would be a good idea to kind of show off that I am genuinely good at it | 我决定,这是个好主意 有点炫耀,我真的很擅长它 |
| 129 | And in the first part of I did my showing off of like achievements the things I did the projects I am there | 在第一部分,我做了我的展示 像成就 我做了我的项目 |
| 130 | Taken so like for example, I organized and anyone in my city | 比如说,我在我的城市里组织过 任何人 |
| 131 | So I devoted like a lot of my space for that | 所以我花了很多时间来做这个 |
| 132 | You can also mention some volunteering experiences or like your passions | 你也可以提到一些志愿行动的经验 或者喜欢你的激情 |
| 133 | You should remember that whatever you write in your personal statement, whether that's even like mentioning your passion | 你应该记住,无论你写 在你的私人陈述, 是否这甚至像提到你的激情 |
| 134 | It should relate back to why you want to study the course or why you're a suitable candidate for that course | 这应该与你为什么想学习课程 或者你为什么适合学习课程有关 |
| 135 | So so say you're applying for like economics, but you won | 所以说,你申请 像经济学,但你赢了 |
| 136 | I don't know an IT competition or you design an app | 我不知道什么是IT比赛 或者你设计一个应用 |
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| 138 | spirit | 精神 |
| 139 | Tough word and my fifth paragraph was really really short | 硬话和我的第五段真的很短 |
| 140 | I think it was just like a two-sentence conclusion of like I really want to study this course | 我觉得这就像两个判决的结论 就像我真的想学习这个课程 |
| 141 | Basically, I'm gonna review my personal statement anyway | 基本上,我还是要回顾我的个人声明 |
| 142 | So like see what I mean and I would say because I didn't really at that point know what I want to do with my like | 所以,喜欢看我是什么意思,我会说 因为我真的没有 在那个时候 知道我想做什么 |
| 143 | I didn't have any specific career path in mind like at all | 我根本没想过什么具体的职业路线 |
| 144 | I was just interested solely in the subject and wanted to find out my options as I like study it and as I attend university | 我只是对这个话题感兴趣 并且想找出我的选择 因为我喜欢学习它 当我上大学时 |
| 145 | If you actually know what you want to do, like you are very keen on I don't know becoming a marine biologist | 如果你真的知道你想做什么, 就像你非常渴望成为海洋生物学家一样 |
| 146 | Say that in your personal statement and say that like studying you believe that studying this course will allow you to pursue that path | 在你的个人发言中说 就像在研究你一样 相信学习这门课程会让你走上这条道路 |
| 147 | And you're really passionate about it | 你真的很热衷于这个 |
| 148 | But like don't worry if you don't because like I said like a lot of people don't know what they're doing and what they want | 不过你别担心,因为我说过 很多人不知道自己在做什么 |
| 149 | To do especially like when you're applying for uni, so you're like | 特别是当你申请Uni的时候,你就像 |
| 150 | 1718 so now for the do's and don'ts of writing your personal statement is just gonna be like a quicker list | 1718年,现在做和不要写 你的个人声明 只是会像一个更快的清单 |
| 151 | So for dues, I wrote plan plan plan and leave enough time before deadline for small corrections and feedback | 因此,对于会费,我写了计划计划 并留下足够的时间 在最后期限前 做小的更正和反馈 |
| 152 | It's very important to have enough time for the three stages as I said, so prep writing and feedback | 如我所说,必须有足够的时间来进行三个阶段的工作, 所以准备写作和反馈 |
| 153 | Writing a personal statement is not just about the middle part because without the prep | 写个人声明不仅仅是中间部分 因为没有准备 |
| 154 | It's not likely to be a very convincing personal statement. | 这不太可能是一个非常令人信服的个人声明. |
| 155 | My second point is in regards to language | 我的第二点是关于语言 |
| 156 | So I wrote use academic professional and confident language. | 所以我用专业的和自信的语言写作。 |
| 157 | So there's not much need for like a very complicated sophisticated | 所以不需要像一个非常复杂的 |
| 158 | Language style right of like writing because that's not what the personal statement is about and you're gonna like only end up wasting words | 语言风格对写作的正确,因为那不是个人声明的目的, 你会喜欢只会浪费文字 |
| 159 | So just stick to the facts and use like a professional academic language | 所以,只要坚持事实 并使用像专业学术语言 |
| 160 | I wrote storytelling because I think it can be a good and convincing tool if you actually have like a little story to | 我写故事是因为我认为这是个很好和令人信服的工具 如果你真的有故事 |
| 161 | quote and this can be a bit tricky because you don't want to get too sloppy and like | 引用和这可能有点棘手 因为你不想太草率 喜欢 |
| 162 | You know like write about your whole life experiences and how we like we've always been passionate about this | 你知道,像写 你的整个生活经历 和我们喜欢 我们一直热衷于这一点 |
| 163 | Or like, you know say stuff that aren't true | 或者说,说些不真实的话 |
| 164 | but if you actually have like a story of a specific person or like an event that inspired you like you learned about | 但是,如果你真的有一个故事 一个特定的人的故事 或者像一个事件 激励你喜欢 你学到 |
| 165 | This subject or this field through that event or that person | 主题或领域 通过事件或那个人 |
| 166 | And that's how you like got into the subject | 这就是你喜欢的话题 |
| 167 | I've read like a couple personal statement that are like mentioned like trips abroad | 我读过一些个人声明 就像被提到出国旅行 |
| 168 | Which is like oh I went there and I saw like the state of the economy and that made me realize how like how much | 这就像哦,我去那里,我看到 像经济状况 让我意识到,多少 |
| 169 | Work is there still to be done and I want to contribute to this like field of education whatever like and I think what's nice | 工作还有待完成 我想为这个教育领域做出贡献 不管是什么 我觉得什么是美好的 |
| 170 | About it is that it adds like a personal unique touch that probably not many others have | 关于它,它添加 像个人独特的触摸, 可能不是很多其他人有 |
| 171 | It's not necessary | 没必要 |
| 172 | But I think it if you have something like that in store then I think it's time to use it | 但我认为如果你有 类似的东西在储存, 那么我想是时候使用它 |
| 173 | I also wrote be really straight to the point and concise | 我也写了直截了当的直截了当 |
| 174 | So again like don't waste words on the language | 所以,再次像不要浪费 语言上的文字 |
| 175 | And my last point would be try to tailor your skills that you're highlighting to match the ones related to the course | 我最后要说的是 调整你的技巧 以配合课程 |
| 176 | So as I said like for economics, it would be showing off that i'm really analytical and I can think in quantitative terms | 所以,正如我所说的 经济学, 它会显示, 我真的很分析 我可以思考的数量 |
| 177 | But i'm also like well organized and mathematically capable | 但我也是有组织 数学能力 |
| 178 | I think like if you're applying for english literature, it would be a completely different set of skills | 我认为如果你申请英语文学, 这将是完全不同的一套技能 |
| 179 | But you can just look through like university's websites and look for like what type of candidate they're looking for and then | 但你可以像大学网站一样 寻找他们要找的候选人 |
| 180 | sort of match your | 有点适合你 |
| 181 | The way you describe your experiences or you know achievements to that specific skill set | 如何描述你的经验 或者你知道 成就到特定的技能集 |
| 182 | So now for don't things that you should avoid when writing your personal statement | 所以现在不要做你写私人声明时应该避免的事 |
| 183 | So I said you'll probably have to cut back on like the words in personal statement anyways | 所以我说,你可能要 削减像字 在个人陈述反正 |
| 184 | Because I think you can use only 4000 characters, which is like 300 400 words from what I can remember | 因为我觉得你只能用4000个字符 这就像300400个字 从我记忆中 |
| 185 | So make sure you're not wasting any words on stuff that don't bring anything new or that don't add to | 所以,确保你不会浪费任何文字 在的东西 不带来任何新 或不增加 |
| 186 | Your personal statement anything valuable? | 你的个人声明有价值吗? |
| 187 | You really have to be very critical with what you wrote and even though like a sentence may sound very | 你真的必须非常批判你写的东西 即使像句子一样听起来非常 |
| 188 | Pretty and beautiful and you know, it just sounds great if it doesn't add anything then just cut it off and like don't be | 漂亮又美丽,你知道,它只是听起来很棒 如果它不添加任何东西, 然后只是切断它,就像没有 |
| 189 | Don't be sorry about it. | 别为此感到抱歉 |
| 190 | I also said don't make your tone too personal and don't make stuff up and although I think | 我也说不要让你的语气太私人, 不要编造东西,虽然我觉得 |
| 191 | Most of us saturate our experiences a bit more or like or like right in a way | 我们大多数都以某种方式饱和了我们的经历 |
| 192 | That makes us look very capable or like very high achieving even though like we're just 17 or 18 | 这让我们看起来非常有能力或像非常高的成就 尽管我们只是17或18岁 |
| 193 | That's like I think acceptable because I think everyone does it because you don't want to like | 这就像我认为可以接受 因为我认为每个人都这样做 因为你不想喜欢 |
| 194 | Downgrade yourself or like wrote like oh I didn't do that much actually because you know | 降级或喜欢写 喜欢哦 我没有做那么多 实际上因为你知道 |
| 195 | You have to be very confident and like kind of a show-off but also not in a very obvious and like striking way | 你必须要非常自信和喜欢一种炫耀, 但也不要非常明显和像惊人的方式 |
| 196 | I also said that you shouldn't use any cliches or quotes because I think every personal statement guide will tell you this like | 我还说过,你不应该使用任何陈词滥调或引用,因为我认为每一个个人发言指南都会告诉你这样 |
| 197 | Quotes are like a no-no and like cliches such as like how I wanted to study | 引用就像一个不 -不, 和喜欢陈词滥调 喜欢像我想学习 |
| 198 | Mechanical engineering since the age of five | 5岁起从事机械工程 |
| 199 | It's probably like bullshit and they will know it and it just doesn't again. | 这也许就像废话 他们会知道它 只是不再。 |
| 200 | It doesn't add up anything to your personal statement | 这与你的个人陈述无关 |
| 201 | It's not very convincing | 这不太有说服力 |
| 202 | so the last part of the whole personal statement process would be to get feedback and not only from the project access mentor in case you | 因此,整个个人声明过程的最后一部分将是获得反馈,而不仅仅是项目访问导师的反馈,以防你 |
| 203 | Apply for it | 申请吧 |
| 204 | but what you can also do and that is what I also did was I was already like signed up to like several like facebook groups of | 但你也可以做,我也做了,我已经像 报名喜欢几个像脸书组 |
| 205 | IB because I did IB it was like mostly IB world or IB Poland and I used those groups to | IB因为我做了IB 它就像大多数IB世界或IB波兰 我利用这些团体 |
| 206 | Search for people like I just posted like oh is there someone who can like read my application through | 寻找像我这样贴上OH的人 有人可以喜欢读我的申请 |
| 207 | Like read my personal statement through and give me like some feedback | 就像读完我的个人声明,给我一些反馈 |
| 208 | You can just have people who actually like followed like a similar path to you who got into your university of choice | 你可以让那些喜欢跟随你一样的人 进入你选择的大学 |
| 209 | You're doing your dream university | 你在做你的梦幻大学 |
| 210 | I think I sent my personal statement to like | 我想我寄了个人声明 |
| 211 | Five seven people in total and that was a really great experience because if there were like several points that you know | 总共5个7个人,这是 一个真正的伟大的经历,因为如果有 像几个点你知道 |
| 212 | Repeated themselves with different people | 和不同的人重复过 |
| 213 | It was like a clear message to me of like what should be left out and what what I should delete and what I should keep | 这就像一个明确的信息给我 像什么应该留下, 什么应该删除,什么应该保留 |
| 214 | In my personal statement | 在我的个人陈述中 |
| 215 | Or like I don't know elaborate on and besides getting like other people's feedback | 或者像我不知道 详细叙述 除了得到别人的反馈 |
| 216 | You will also need to read your personal statement many many times | 您还需要多次阅读您的个人声明 |
| 217 | Not only like spell checking but just like read the tone how it just reads | 不仅喜欢拼写检查 而且喜欢读音调如何读 |
| 218 | If the like sentences don't sound too weird or they're not too long or too short | 如果这样的句子听上去不怪 或者没有太长或者太短 |
| 219 | It all should just sound like a coherent cohesive paper and you will probably be so sick of your personal statement | 这听起来应该像一份连贯的论文 你可能已经厌倦了你的私人言论 |
| 220 | By the time you go submit it | 当你去提交的时候 |
| 221 | But that's how it should be if you feel like you haven't read it enough times read it five more times just to be sure | 但如果你觉得你读的不够多 再读五遍就好了 |
| 222 | So lastly as promised I would like to read you my personal statement and it's specific to economics | 所以,最后,按照承诺,我想 读你我的个人声明 并且它是特定的经济学 |
| 223 | So obviously if you're applying for econ specifically it would be probably useful and informative for you | 很明显,如果你申请经济 具体地说,那对你可能有用 和信息 |
| 224 | But I think even if you don't necessarily apply for economics | 但我认为即使你不一定申请经济学 |
| 225 | I think the points i've mentioned are like relate to any kind of subject | 我觉得我提到的要点 都跟任何话题有关 |
| 226 | I'm just gonna make a disclaimer because i'm a perfectionist and i'm not proud of this CV right now | 我现在要发表免责声明 因为我是个完美主义者 我现在不为这支CV骄傲 |
| 227 | I wrote it so long ago and I can definitely see like an improvement or like there are so many points | 我写了这么久,我看得出来是进步,还是说有很多点 |
| 228 | I would like change about this | 我想改变这个 |
| 229 | But i'm still gonna read it through because I submitted it at the age when I applied for it | 但我还是要读完 因为我在申请的时候就提交了 |
| 230 | So it like related to my skills and competency at that time | 因此,它喜欢与我的技能和能力 在当时 |
| 231 | Okay, so let's get to it driven by curiosity to comprehend the nature of real life economic phenomena | 好吧,让我们开始 由好奇心驱动 了解真实生活 经济现象的性质 |
| 232 | I discovered that the inherent ability involved in studying economics is critical thinking | 我发现研究经济学的内在能力 是批判性的思考 |
| 233 | Undermining the credibility of what is considered an impregnable truth as well as daring to pose a what-if question | 破坏被认为是不可辩驳的真相的可信度,以及敢于提出什么问题 |
| 234 | Has allowed our economy to undergo fundamental changes from european capitalism to economic globalization | 使得我们的经济发生了从欧洲资本主义到经济全球化的根本变化 |
| 235 | Which revolutionized international trade and economics of scale? | 哪些国际贸易和规模经济发生了革命性的变化? |
| 236 | A book I have read entitled excuse me professor challenging the myths of progressivism by laurence w reed | 我读过一本名为"对不起"的书 教授通过 Laurence w Reed 挑战进步主义的神话 |
| 237 | Which discussed progressivism fallacies from an economic perspective made me realize how crucial it is to constantly reevaluate what we already know about economics | 从经济角度来讨论进步主义谬论,让我意识到不断重新评估我们已经了解的经济学有多重要。 |
| 238 | I found it interesting to observe how the focus of many economists shifted from purely theoretical assumption-based models | 我发现有趣的是看到许多经济学家的焦点是如何从纯粹基于理论的假设模型转变的 |
| 239 | To once accounting for the intricities of human psychology | 曾经为人类心理的缺陷负责 |
| 240 | Eager to broaden my understanding of the field of behavioral economics. | 试图扩大我对行为经济学的理解 |
| 241 | I have reached for richard richard thaler's | 我找了里查德・里查德・特勒 |
| 242 | Misbehaving the making of behavioral economics what fascinates me in particular | 搞错行为经济学让我特别着迷 |
| 243 | Is thaler's concluding thought on the nature of economics in the future in which he states that when contemporary economists begin to take insights of psychology | Thaler是对未来经济学性质的结论性思考,他在其中指出,当当代经济学家开始洞察心理学时, |
| 244 | Into account branches of behavioral and traditional economics will merge into a uniform social science | 将行为学和传统经济学的分支合并为统一的社会科学 |
| 245 | Following that reflection I concluded that the age of big data opened a whole new range of possibilities | 经过反思,我的结论是,大数据时代开辟了全新的可能性。 |
| 246 | In which a behavioral approach to economic decision-making processes should be considered as irrelevant as logical mathematical analysis | 在其中,对经济决策过程采取的行为方法应被视为与逻辑数学分析无关 |
| 247 | The broad application of mathematics in economics is a significant factor contributing to my decision about selecting the course | 数学在经济学中的广泛应用,是促使我决定选择课程的一个重要因素 |
| 248 | Due to my analytical skills and self-discipline. | 因为我的分析技巧和自律 |
| 249 | I sought to expand my mathematical abilities through participating in mathematical olympiads | 我试图通过参加数学奥运会来拓展我的数学能力 |
| 250 | My success on the regional level led me to receiving a scholarship from białystok's president twice | 我在地区层面的成功使我两次获得比亚韦斯托克总统的奖学金 |
| 251 | Although integrating the psychological and mathematical aspects of economics may seem unintuitive | 虽然综合了经济学的心理和数学方面 可能看起来不直观 |
| 252 | Today's economic tools allow for a statistical interpretation of the data concerning various stakeholders market choices | 当今的经济工具允许从统计角度解释有关各种利益有关者市场选择的数据。 |
| 253 | Consequently one might model decision-making processes in accordance with psychologically motivated choices and include economically | 因此,人们可以根据心理方面的选择,在决策过程中树立榜样,并纳入经济因素。 |
| 254 | Irrational behavior leading to more accurate predictions of consumer firm interactions in september 2018 | 2018年September导致更准确预测消费企业相互作用的不合理行为 |
| 255 | I became the usg for finance and external affairs at biya moon 2019 an annual model united nations conference | 我在2019年的Biya Moon成为金融和对外事务组织 一年一度的模拟联合国会议 |
| 256 | Attended by nearly 100 students from all over the world | 来自世界各地的近100名学生参加了讲习班。 |
| 257 | My responsibilities included seeking sponsors planning out expenses and managing the funds | 我的职责包括寻找赞助商 规划支出和管理资金 |
| 258 | Despite numeral obstacles the experience taught me a lot in terms of administrating finances | 虽然遇到很多障碍,但是在管理财务方面,经验教会了我很多。 |
| 259 | But also working in a team and managing my time effectively | 同时也在团队中工作 有效地管理我的时间 |
| 260 | Moreover, I have attended several other muns as a delegate | 此外,我还作为代表出席了其他几个会议。 |
| 261 | These have extensively improved my research and public speaking skills and introduced me to standard un procedures | 这些都大大提高了我的研究和公开演讲能力, 并给我介绍了标准程序 |
| 262 | Another interest of mine is debating in my city's debating society taking part in tournaments made me | 我的另一个兴趣是辩论 我的城市辩论社会 参加比赛让我 |
| 263 | Taking part in tournaments requires me to think outside the box and construct logical arguments under time pressure | 参加锦标赛需要我在时间压力下思考和构思逻辑 |
| 264 | To enhance my performances. | 来增强我的表演 |
| 265 | I started following the news from sources such as bbc's global news podcast | 我开始关注来自Bbc全球新闻播客的消息 |
| 266 | As well as reading economics related articles from newspapers such as the economist | 以及阅读经济学家等报纸的经济学相关文章 |
| 267 | As a result, I discovered how studying demand pool inflation allowed me to comprehend the roots of the venezuelan crisis | 因此,我发现如何研究 需求池通货膨胀 让我能够理解 韦尼祖兰危机的根源 |
| 268 | And how learning about tariffs and quotas led to my enhanced understanding of the us china trade war | 如何学习关税和配额 导致我更了解我们的中国贸易战争 |
| 269 | I wholeheartedly believe that earning my economics degree through hard work and long-term commitment will serve as a starting point for my perspective career | 我全心全意地相信,通过辛勤工作和长期承诺来获得经济学位,将成为我展望人生的起点。 |
| 270 | Within the field so that is everything for my personal statement and this video as well | 因此,这是所有的东西 我的个人发言和这段视频 |
| 271 | And yeah, that is everything for this video. | 是的,这是所有 视频。 |
| 272 | Thank you much for watching | 谢谢你的观看 |
| 273 | I hope it was helpful at least to some of you and i'll see you in another one. | 我希望这至少能对你们中的一些人有所帮助 我会再见到你的 |
| 274 | Bye. | 再见。 |
| 275 | Bye | 再见 |
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