【英音】牛津学霸分享：如何写一篇First Class毕业论
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| 0:00 | Hey everyone welcome back to my channel if you are new here then my name is Rosie and I am a recent graduate of the | 嘿,大家欢迎回到我的频道 如果你是新来的... ...那么我的名字是罗西,我是刚毕业的 |
| 0:07 | University of Oxford | 牛津大学 |
| 0:19 | Today's video is a really requested one how I got a first on my dissertation and what universities are looking for | 今天的视频是真正要求的 如何我得到了我的论文的第一个 和大学正在寻找什么 |
| 0:27 | In order to give a first out for a dissertation. | 以为论文先出. |
| 0:30 | I didn't write my own dissertation too long ago | 我很久没有自己写论文了 |
| 0:33 | It was submitted in March | 它于3月提交 |
| 0:36 | 2019 is this | 这是2019年 |
| 0:40 | And I got a 75 out of 100 on my dissertations | 我论文里有75个 |
| 0:44 | And it has also been nominated for a Quaternary research association undergraduate dissertation prize | 也获得了Quaternary研究协会本科论文奖的提名 |
| 0:53 | I will find out the results of that in January, but for now it is an award nominated | 我将在1月份找出结果,但现在它是一个被提名的奖项 |
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| 1 | Hey everyone welcome back to my channel if you are new here then my name is Rosie and I am a recent graduate of the | 嘿,大家欢迎回到我的频道 如果你是新来的... ...那么我的名字是罗西,我是刚毕业的 |
| 2 | University of Oxford | 牛津大学 |
| 3 | Today's video is a really requested one how I got a first on my dissertation and what universities are looking for | 今天的视频是真正要求的 如何我得到了我的论文的第一个 和大学正在寻找什么 |
| 4 | In order to give a first out for a dissertation. | 以为论文先出. |
| 5 | I didn't write my own dissertation too long ago | 我很久没有自己写论文了 |
| 6 | It was submitted in March | 它于3月提交 |
| 7 | 2019 is this | 这是2019年 |
| 8 | And I got a 75 out of 100 on my dissertations | 我论文里有75个 |
| 9 | And it has also been nominated for a Quaternary research association undergraduate dissertation prize | 也获得了Quaternary研究协会本科论文奖的提名 |
| 10 | I will find out the results of that in January, but for now it is an award nominated | 我将在1月份找出结果,但现在它是一个被提名的奖项 |
| 11 | Oxford University first-class dissertation, and I'm never gonna stop telling everyone that because I am so proud of it | 牛津大学一流的论文, 我永远不会停止告诉大家, 因为我是如此骄傲 |
| 12 | In order to make this video as kind of informative as possible | 为了让这段视频尽可能丰富多彩 |
| 13 | I've been researching different mark schemes for dissertations for universities across the country | 我为全国大学的论文研究了不同的评分计划 |
| 14 | I've got York Sheffield Nottingham and Manchester. | 我有约克·谢菲尔德·诺丁汉和曼彻斯特 |
| 15 | I didn't actually get Oxford's because I can't access it anymore and | 我实际上没有拿到牛津的 因为我不能再访问它, |
| 16 | I can pretty much remember what was on it | 我几乎可以记得它是什么 |
| 17 | I spent so long reading it last year that most of the advice that I give it isn't directly from someone else's mark scheme | 去年我读了这么多年 大部分建议 不是直接来自别人的记号计划 |
| 18 | It's from the Oxford mark scheme | 这是牛津的记分计划 |
| 19 | Just on that note if you're revising for anything or writing anything looking at the mark schemes for things is | 如果你正在修改任何内容 或写任何关于事物的标记计划 |
| 20 | Such a good way of making sure that you are on the right track | 这么好的方式确保你走在正确的轨道上 |
| 21 | There's absolutely no point doing all this revision and writing essay after essay | 做这些修改和写散文绝对没有意义 |
| 22 | If you don't look at mark schemes to see if you're actually you know including everything that they want | 如果你不看标记计划 看看你是否真的知道 包括他们想要的一切 |
| 23 | So just a side tip | 所以只是侧倾 |
| 24 | French Italian | 意大利法语 |
| 25 | Structure is at the top of every single mark scheme that I could find and on Manchester's mark scheme | 在曼彻斯特的记分计划上 结构是每个记分计划的顶部 |
| 26 | It's said to get into the 80s and 90s. | 据说进入八十九十年代. |
| 27 | You need to have a coherent polished and fluent structure | 你需要有一个连贯的 抛光和流畅的结构 |
| 28 | So a coherent macro structure is referring to the title and overarching sections of your dissertation including headings | 因此,一个连贯的宏观结构是指您论文的标题和总括部分,包括标题 |
| 29 | subheadings references and | 参考和 |
| 30 | Appendices now these are kind of like the skeleton of your dissertation and when I was writing mine | 现在的附录 有点像 你论文的骨架 当我写我的 |
| 31 | I made sure that I kind of had an overall document where I'd written out | 我确信我有一份完整的文件 我写了出来 |
| 32 | Every section that I planned on having at the beginning whether or not I continued all of those sections through | 我计划开始的每个部分 是否继续这些部分 |
| 33 | this is what I plan to have done and | 这就是我打算做的 |
| 34 | It meant that I did have a skeleton that I could follow and it really helped me personally | 意思是,我确实有一个骨架,我可以跟踪, 它真的帮助了我个人 |
| 35 | Because it meant that I wasn't just kind of throwing ideas left right and center and I can actually plan out when I was going | 因为这意味着我不只是 扔想法 左和中,我实际上可以计划 当我去 |
| 36 | To attack different sections what research I needed for different sections | 要攻击不同的部分 我需要研究的不同部分 |
| 37 | It just basically helped me to formulate a more coherent idea of what I was actually going to do because a dissertation | 基本上,它帮助我 提出一个更一致的想法 我实际上要做什么 因为论文 |
| 38 | is hard | 很难 |
| 39 | So the coherency and the fluency of your overall structure does translate down to the lower first class | 所以,你整体结构的一致性和流畅性 已经转化为下一级 |
| 40 | Points which is kind of where I was sat in the 75 | 我坐在75号的点上 |
| 41 | 70 to 90 on Manchester's list says that it is lacking polish to get to this polish stage | 曼彻斯特名单上的70到90人 说没有油光进入这个油光舞台 |
| 42 | you would have to be redrafting lots and lots of times I | 你不得不重新起草很多次 |
| 43 | drafted my chapters | 起草我的章节 |
| 44 | Individually, so I didn't wait until I'd got a whole thing before I sent it off | 就我个人而言,所以我没有等到我得到了一个整件事之后,才把它送走 |
| 45 | And I know for me that would have made me panic because I wouldn't have had the feedback | 我知道那会让我恐慌 因为我不会得到反馈 |
| 46 | Along the way that I needed to make sure I was on the right track | 沿着我需要的路 确保我是正确的轨道 |
| 47 | So what I did is essentially whenever I'd written quite a lot | 所以,我所做的基本上 每当我写了很多 |
| 48 | I would send it to my supervisor and he would look through it be like this is what I | 我会把它寄给我的主管 他会看穿它 |
| 49 | Don't think should be in here. | 不要认为应该在这里。 |
| 50 | I think these should go the other way around | 我觉得这些应该换个地方 |
| 51 | I think this should be in this section not this section and that really helped me then to | 我认为应该放在这一节,而不是这一节,这真的帮助了我 |
| 52 | Adjust the plans that I had got ready in terms of the skeleton that I've discussed | 根据我讨论过的骨架调整我准备的计划 |
| 53 | I'm also just working out how much I needed to still do in my time | 我还在研究我需要做多少事 |
| 54 | Every dissertation should have an abstract which makes up part of the general structure | 每篇论文应该有一个抽象的,构成一般结构的一部分 |
| 55 | According to the University of Bristol an abstract should be concise outline the main aims of the study methodology findings and | 布里斯托尔大学认为,摘要应简明扼要地概述研究方法的结论和主要目的。 |
| 56 | Conclusions and that is written as one of the most important parts of the micro structure of the dissertation | 结论和作为论文微观结构最重要的部分之一撰写 |
| 57 | Which is essentially like the contents of every small section. | 这基本上就像每一小节的内容。 |
| 58 | This is my abstract | 这是我的抽象 |
| 59 | It's about a page and then I have acknowledgments at the bottom as you can see it is double-spaced and | 这是关于一页,然后我得到了承认 在底部,你可以看到它是双行 |
| 60 | Clearly not that long it shows the reader | 很明显,没有那么长 它显示读者 |
| 61 | Kind of a general outline of what you're doing. | 算是你所做的事的大纲 |
| 62 | It needs to present your main argument clearly concisely and also show your | 它需要清晰地阐述你的主要论点,并表明你 |
| 63 | misimpressive or main conclusion in | 错误或主要结论 |
| 64 | in very few words | 用很少的话 |
| 65 | I'm sure you've heard the stone age occurred for two and a half minutes | 我敢肯定,你已经听说 石器时代发生了两个半分钟 |
| 66 | An introduction of a dissertation or thesis is completely different to one in an essay | 论文或论文的介绍与论文的介绍完全不同 |
| 67 | What I mean by this is that an introduction in an essay is usually only a paragraph | 我的意思是,在一篇论文中的介绍 通常只是一段 |
| 68 | it is kind of 200 250 words max and | 这是种200250字最大和 |
| 69 | Kind of sums up what you're doing an introduction in a dissertation | 来总结一下你在论文中的介绍 |
| 70 | varies depending on | 视 |
| 71 | What you're writing about what style you're writing for | 你在写什么 你写什么风格 |
| 72 | Mine was long it starts here | 我从这里开始很久了 |
| 73 | So here | 所以这里 |
| 74 | 16 pages of introduction. | 16页介绍. |
| 75 | I remember rightly my introduction was about four and a half thousand words | 我记得我的介绍很正确 大约是4500个字 |
| 76 | I panicked my supervisor said no, it's perfect for your work | 我惊慌失措,我的上司说不行,这很适合你 |
| 77 | Mine had to introduce the geography of where like my main argument was set | 我不得不介绍我的主要论点所在的地理 |
| 78 | I had to introduce the people that I was talking about in my dissertation | 我不得不介绍我在论文里讲的人 |
| 79 | I had to introduce where I got my data from and also the main | 我得介绍一下我从哪里得到的数据 还有主要数据 |
| 80 | kind of key background information as to why I've chosen this topic area and | 那种关键的背景资料 关于我为什么选择这个主题领域 |
| 81 | Finally how my dissertation would be useful for future study by anyone who wanted to use it now | 最后,我的论文将如何有用 对于将来的研究 谁想现在使用它 |
| 82 | This I think is one of the most important things that you should be doing with your dissertation | 我想这是你论文中最重要的一件事 |
| 83 | Making sure that the research is going to be useful in the future and presenting this in your this this | 确保研究将来有用 并在你这本书中介绍 |
| 84 | Presenting this in your introduction as confidently as possible | 在你的介绍中尽可能自信地提出这一点 |
| 85 | Sheffield University have written that their top class dissertations should situate the topic | 谢菲尔德大学写道 他们的顶级论文应该突出话题 |
| 86 | Confidently within the wider literature and this should be done in the introduction | 相信在更广泛的文献中,应在导言中这样做 |
| 87 | It's essentially you sum up the research that's already been done and then you place yours | 基本上你总结一下已经做的研究 然后放上你的 |
| 88 | Where you think it should go amongst the wider literature why it's useful why it facilitates them and kind of why you've ended up with | 你认为它应该走在 更广泛的文献中 为什么它有用 为什么它方便他们 和那种为什么你结束了 |
| 89 | That research topic from these other texts that you've introduced | 你介绍的这些其他文本的研究课题 |
| 90 | Similarly Manchester explains that you should have a range of literature cited again | 同样,曼彻斯特解释说,你应该再引用一系列文献 |
| 91 | Introduce them all in the introduction and they explain why you've chosen those main pieces and how it links to your work | 在导言中介绍所有内容,并解释为什么你选择了这些主要作品,以及它如何与你的工作联系起来 |
| 92 | The University of Nottingham sociology and social policy department has also said that their top-class work needs to be individual | 诺丁汉大学社会学和社会政策系也表示,他们的顶级工作必须是个人的。 |
| 93 | unique and | 独立和 |
| 94 | imaginative again your own ideas | 又有想象力,你自己的想法 |
| 95 | Developing new ways that research can be kind of twisted on its head or even brand-new research that just has not been done before | 开发新的方法,使研究 可能有点扭曲 它的头,甚至全新的研究 只是没有做过 |
| 96 | Either way whether you choose to kind of further someone else's study or completely start your own | 无论你选择进一步学习还是完全开始自己的研究 |
| 97 | It has to be in a way that is imaginative creative and build upon | 必须以富有想象力的创造力和以 |
| 98 | Already useful information your work is being written to be used by future scholars | 已经有用的信息 您的作品正在被撰写 供未来的学者使用 |
| 99 | If you go in with the mindset that this needs to be good enough new enough that people in the future use my work | 如果你的心态是,这需要 足够好的新到足够 人们在未来使用我的工作 |
| 100 | As a reference point you will be on the right track | 作为参考点,你会走在正确的轨道上 |
| 101 | This section is probably where you're gonna need the most help from your supervisor | 这个部门可能是你最需要上司帮助的地方 |
| 102 | Because there will be a lot of things that you've not come across before such as statistics if you're doing a humanities degree I | 因为很多事情你之前没有遇到过 比如统计 如果你在做人文科学学位 |
| 103 | Had never done statistics and yet I think because I did them | 从来没有做过统计, 但我认为因为我做的 |
| 104 | That's how I got into the first-class category | 所以我才进入头等舱 |
| 105 | Because not enough archaeology and anthropology dissertation to do include statistics | 因为考古学和人类学论文 不足以包括统计 |
| 106 | So mine was kind of higher than the rest if that makes sense now my materials and methods chapter | 所以,我的有点高于其他 如果这有道理 现在,我的材料和方法章 |
| 107 | started off like this | 像这样开始的 |
| 108 | Essentially you're talking about where you got your data from why you chose that method any calculations that you might have done | 基本上,你说的是你从哪里得到的数据 为什么选择了这种方法 任何你可能做过的计算 |
| 109 | As you can see here I have lots of | 如你所见,我有很多 |
| 110 | Different calculations and how you present your tables and photos is also part of your mark | 不同的计算和如何呈现表格和照片也是标记的一部分 |
| 111 | For example the University of Manchester says their first-class dissertation | 比如曼彻斯特大学说他们的一流论文 |
| 112 | Should have an intelligent and creative use of bigots now | 现在应该有智慧和创造性地利用偏执 |
| 113 | This is where I have introduced my use of statistics in the methods section for example | 例如,在方法一节中,我在这里介绍了我对统计数据的使用。 |
| 114 | I've got the | 我拿着 |
| 115 | Calculations that I've used in order to do a t-test and a chi-square test these were really important in | 我用来做T测试和Chi-square测试的计算 这些都是非常重要的 |
| 116 | Getting the grade that I did because it showed that I had | 得到我的分数 因为它显示我有 |
| 117 | In-depth understanding of what techniques I needed to use in order to apply the knowledge that I've gathered to my actual question | 深入了解我需要用什么技术 来运用我收集的知识 来回答我的实际问题 |
| 118 | In order to make a conclusion | 为了得出结论 |
| 119 | Next up is the results section which leads us nicely on to our analysis section of this video | 接下来是结果部分 引导我们进入我们的分析部分 |
| 120 | Everyone thinks they know the story of Dick Turpin's Highway Glory | 大家都以为知道迪克·图平的高速公路荣耀的故事 |
| 121 | But my past is any dissertation should have a findings or results section where you are | 但我的过去是任何论文 应该有一个结论或结果部分 你在哪里 |
| 122 | only presenting what you have found and you are not | 只展示你发现的,你没有 |
| 123 | Analyzing them or explaining what this means so the section should be | 分析或解释这意味着什么,所以这一部分应该是 |
| 124 | Kind of descriptory like I am literally just presenting what I found in some graphs and explaining the graphs | 那种描述 像我的字面意思 只是展示我发现 一些图表 和解释的图表 |
| 125 | And explaining what my testing told me so | 并解释我的测试告诉我的 |
| 126 | So here look I've talked about a t-test and I have footnotes on these pages to explain | 看这里,我讲过一个T测试, 我有一些脚注在这些页上解释 |
| 127 | Further what things mean and all of that presentation comes into | 更何况事情的意义 和所有的介绍 |
| 128 | What Manchester was talking about an appropriate use of figures imaginative use of figures if you have far too much data | 曼彻斯特说的是,如果你的数据太多的话, 如何适当地使用数字 想象力地使用数字 |
| 129 | to put in the results section like I did you can use an appendix right at the end and | 把结果部分 像我一样,你可以使用 附录右 在结尾和 |
| 130 | Put in all of your hundreds of tables that you spend hours and hours over Christmas making | 把你的几百张桌子都放进去 圣诞节的时候你花了很多时间 |
| 131 | Once you've presented your results and you've analysed them in terms of | 一旦你提出了你的结果, 你分析了他们 |
| 132 | Pulling out stats and general patterns you can move on to your discussion. | 抽出数据 和一般模式 你可以继续讨论。 |
| 133 | This is the fun bit | 这是有趣的一点 |
| 134 | A first-class discussion section should tie the whole thing together | 头等舱讨论部分应该把整件事联系起来 |
| 135 | It is your most important section because it is where you can argue why your knowledge is | 这是你最重要的部分,因为它是你可以争论 为什么你的知识是 |
| 136 | So important what it means what patterns in the results might tell you and again how it is going to be useful in the future | 如此重要 这意味着什么是结果的规律 可能告诉你,再次 它将如何是有用的未来 |
| 137 | now all of your literature and your sources should have been brought in in the | 现在你们所有的文献和来源 都应该被带进 |
| 138 | Introduction and what all of these mark schemes have been saying is that you shouldn't be bringing new information up in the discussion | 介绍和所有这些标记计划 一直在说,你不应该在讨论中提出新的信息 |
| 139 | My discussion wasn't too long | 我的讨论没有太久 |
| 140 | It was actually shorter than my introduction but all of the sections that I split it into in my subtitles | 它实际上比我的介绍短... ...但所有的章节,我把它分成我的字幕 |
| 141 | were titles made from | 头衔来自 |
| 142 | points drawn in the introduction and bits that I | 导 言中抽出的点数和位数 |
| 143 | Had already said that I was going to explain and talk about in the introduction using my dissertation as an example | 已经说过我要用我的论文作为例子 在导言中解释和谈论 |
| 144 | In the introduction I had said that certain factors will affect the growth of long bones in children and they would be | 在导言中,我曾说,某些因素会影响儿童长骨的生长,而且会影响儿童的长骨。 |
| 145 | genetic affinity | 遗传亲缘关系 |
| 146 | geographical and latitudinal affinity | 地理和纬度关系 |
| 147 | Nursing weaning and early diet and also just general stunting in childhood and adolescence | 护理断奶和早期饮食,以及儿童和青少年普遍发育迟缓 |
| 148 | All of these things were brought up | 所有这些事情都是提起来的 |
| 149 | during my introduction and | 在我的介绍和 |
| 150 | they were brought up because a lot of literature was already done on those topics and | 他们之所以被提起,是因为许多关于这些主题的文献已经做了。 |
| 151 | Tying them together is how kind of I chose my research interest and that is why my intro was so long | 把他们绑在一起 就是我选择研究兴趣的原因 |
| 152 | But because I had such a long introduction it meant that I could create for example | 但因为我有这么长的介绍 意味着我可以创造例如 |
| 153 | Separate sections assessing whether or not all of my hypotheses about these different things | 分别评估我对这些不同事物的所有假设 |
| 154 | Were correct based on my own results. | 根据我自己的结果,是正确的。 |
| 155 | The discussion is not the conclusion. | 讨论不是结论。 |
| 156 | The conclusion is a separate section | 结论是单独一节 |
| 157 | however, your conclusions should start to be drawn in terms of responding to your hypotheses and | 但是,你的结论应该开始 以回应你的假设和 |
| 158 | Assessing whether or not you have kind of gone the right way about doing things if there was any problems why that might be | 评估你是否走对路了 如果有什么问题的话 |
| 159 | They aren't a recount of everything you did or an evaluation of your work | 这不是你所做的一切的回忆 也不是对你的工作的评价 |
| 160 | But they should be critical and evaluative in terms of how you have utilized specific sources | 但对于你如何利用特定来源来说,它们应该是批判性的和评价性的 |
| 161 | Why and whether or not previous findings actually work alongside yours? | 为什么和之前的发现 是否与你的一样有效? |
| 162 | And | 还有 |
| 163 | Finally is your conclusion | 最后是你的结论 |
| 164 | Now by this point you finish the discussion and you feel like it's all done and over | 现在,你结束讨论,你觉得一切都结束了 |
| 165 | But it's not you still have to tie up all of your findings and | 但你还得把发现都整理好 |
| 166 | Analysis into what Liverpool explains should be a well-justified organized and argued conclusion | 对利物浦解释的内容的分析应当是一个有组织且有论据的结论 |
| 167 | My conclusion was only a page and a bit. | 我的结论只是一页一页 |
| 168 | I'm pretty sure it was only around 200 words | 我敢肯定,只有200个字 |
| 169 | It looks like this starts here | 好像从这里开始的 |
| 170 | I've discussed my main aims at the start explained in one centers kind of what my methods were and then gone on here to answer | 我讨论了我开始的主要目的 在一个中心 解释了我的方法 |
| 171 | whether my hypotheses were correct and | 我的假设是否正确 |
| 172 | Lastly on the next page I have summed up | 我最后在下一页总结了 |
| 173 | Summed up in one paragraph how my study helps the discipline and how it can continue to help further study | 总结一下我的研究如何帮助学科 以及如何继续帮助进一步研究 |
| 174 | The main point that you need to hit in your dissertation is to write out your main aim and your main method | 在论文中你需要的要点是写出你的主要目的和主要方法 |
| 175 | Whether your hypotheses were met where the new things came out that you didn't expect and then what is gonna happen with this? | 你的假说是否在你没想到的新事物出现的地方 被满足了 然后会发生什么? |
| 176 | Research in the future. | 未来研究. |
| 177 | Why is it useful those six things? | 为什么这六件事有用? |
| 178 | Should essentially be the basis of your entire dissertation | 基本上应该是你论文的基础 |
| 179 | But the conclusion is a little microcosm of your entire dissertation. | 但结论是你们论文的缩影 |
| 180 | So it's easy to sum up there | 所以很容易总结出来 |
| 181 | And then | 礛 |
| 182 | You are done | 你够了 |
| 183 | Unless you haven't done your references yet and in which case I'm so sorry | 除非你还没做你的推荐书 在这种情况下,我很抱歉 |
| 184 | Ideally your references should be separated into books | 最好把参考文献分到书里 |
| 185 | journals and websites and contributions to books I | 期刊和网站以及对书籍的贡献 |
| 186 | Like chapters that you've used my references took up a lot of pages and then I have my appendix | 就像你用我的参考文献的章节 翻了很多页,然后我的附录 |
| 187 | but every university has different regulations for what your bibliography and references should look like and | 但每个大学都有不同的规定 你的书目和参考文献应该是什么样子和 |
| 188 | Therefore you need to check your own marking conventions for that | 因此,你需要检查你自己的标记惯例 |
| 189 | But just make sure that you haven't missed any and that every single reference you have put into your dissertation | 但只要确保你没有错过任何 和每一个你已经 引用到你的论文 |
| 190 | Appears here. | 看起来像在这里。 |
| 191 | There is a tool on Microsoft words. | 微软词上有一个工具。 |
| 192 | That means you can add references to a main | 也就是说,你可以添加 引用主 |
| 193 | Reference bank at the end as you go along. | 在你走的尽头的参考银行。 |
| 194 | There's also software | 还有软件 |
| 195 | That I haven't used but definitely exists and that might help you as you saw | 我没有用过,但绝对存在 这可能帮助你,如你所见 |
| 196 | My appendix came after my references and your appendix is basically a section for any data or | 我的附录是在我的参考文献之后, 你的附录基本上是一个章节 任何数据或 |
| 197 | quotes or images that are necessary | 需要引用或图像 |
| 198 | Emphasis are necessary to get in your point across and proving that you have actually done kind of all of the work and the calculations | 必须强调你的观点 并证明你确实做了所有的工作和计算 |
| 199 | But wouldn't fit in the main body of text at the front of your dissertation | 但不适合你论文前的正文 |
| 200 | You should also have a list of figures and a list of tables | 您还应有图表列表 |
| 201 | and these all contribute to the structure the overall structure and | 这些都有助于结构的整体结构, |
| 202 | It needs to be presented nicely and coherently as every single one of these mark schemes have said and that is | 正如这些标记办法中的每一个都说过的那样,需要以良好和连贯的方式提出这种标记。 |
| 203 | the end of this video I | 影片的结尾 |
| 204 | Hope that this actually kind of made some sense and has helped clear things up about writing a dissertation about what? | 希望这真的有道理 有助于澄清写一篇关于什么的论文? |
| 205 | universities actually want from a dissertation and | 大学实际上想要 从论文和 |
| 206 | Getting the top marks if you have any questions, please write them in the comments. | 如果有任何问题,请在评论中写上最高标记。 |
| 207 | I've definitely not covered everything | 我绝对没有覆盖一切 |
| 208 | I just wanted to fit as much as possible into one video | 我只是想尽量融入一个视频 |
| 209 | so there's | 所以这里有 |
| 210 | 100% things that I've missed you can DM me on Instagram or | 我错过了百分之百的东西 你可以在Instagram上毁了我 |
| 211 | Leave me a comment as I said give me a thumbs up and subscribe if you enjoyed this video | 照我说的,给我个提示,如果你喜欢这段视频的话,就给我签个名 |
| 212 | I will see you in my next video. | 我会看到你在我的下一个视频。 |
| 213 | Bye | 再见 |
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